Wow, that we pretty emo
Awsome movie man, it is more commentary than a nice work of flash. I love the message, and yes, Communism does love us! Good work comrad. Viva La Revolution!
didn't really care for the clocks, but the music was great. clock movies can be good if they dont talk, that bonzi buddy voice sucks. nice flash, make some more vids to punk songs. For the Punx!!
Good work, just a few things. you are a good drawer, so maby try tracing them in flash and adding color, but the black and white is a nice touch. Maby add a music selection menu in the corner to play some punk songs. maby some rancid or anti-flag, or whatever ya like. also, the boots didn't fit her too well, maybe resize them a bit. but yeah, nice figure drawing dude, keep it up. For the Punx!!!
I like the program, gives peeps a chance to make some cool shit. But, from the background songs it sounds like you have a bassist in your band, it would be cool to have a bassist to controll too. Maby you could add a "Show" feature where you could select a place to play your song with the crowd and everything. good job though, must have spent some time recording all the riffs, thanks for the good work, keep rocking!
I would if Flash wasn'T so fucking slow :)
That was the original idea...I had to go the simple way...even the smooth moving lights were too much, I had to make them jump from 1 position to the other.
it's alright but you need to learn about emphasis. the whole song registers on the same level. I don't feel a change between the verse and the chorus.
Care to elaborate more?
Emphasis has many meanings, from the verse to the chourus instruments are taking away, voices are added, and theres dead silence except vocals. You go from constant instruments, to a "pound silence".
I believe what your meaning is to change the chorus completley? It all builds up, and it goes to a point of silence, all levels change.
Or are you talking about veloicty? Soft, into a hard chorus?
You really need to think about build ups, the song doesn't pull me in. Study a thing called the "hanging note" it will help a lot.
Back then I for some reason had an ego thinking that my music was the EPIC BEST IN DA WURLD!!!1 I now realise I had my head up my ass and agree with your points and I myself would rate this a 5, probably 6.
Oh and one more thing:
I looked that up that hanging note, and guess what. IT DOESN'T EVEN EXISTTT!!!1 BLRURLAARBARULAR GAHHH!
I'd thank you for the feedback, but seeing as I bashed you when I got the review in January, and didn't take the advice--even if it's about a non existant musical technique, or at least something that can not be found in the oxford dictionary, encyclopedia, or any knowledgeable source--It's irrelevant because I didn't improve as a result...
Oh wtf, Thanks for the feedback
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